(Updated May 9, 2009) Although there were a lot of excellent entries, Quiet One's submission, along with a supporting analysis of this scene, was marvelous... Imagining Kyoko with the ability to identify others based solely on the petite-ness of their butts is hilarious!Congratulations to anonymous for winning previous Challenge #3!
The rules are simple: I have removed the original dialogue from a doujinshi scene. All you have to do is think of replacement dialogue that brings a wonderfully humorous spin to the scene and submit your text entry by commenting on this post. You may also include some brief "situational information" in brackets. The entry that induces the most laughter will be declared the winner, and I will upload a professional edit of the scene with the winning text and the winner's name.
The scene for this fourth challenge comes from Yamatogawa's well-drawn comic Witchcraft in which we see Kyoko flipping up Sara's skirt. Although the comic has a legitimate reason for Kyoko doing this, it's time for a different humorous spin on this scene... Good luck!
24 comments:
Eeh? It's not the Kuma one...
My turn : I never thought I'd catch you wearing panties under your miniskirt, sis...
hmmm...so my keys aren't there...
Ah! The original lazy bum!
white is not your color
Where's the didlo i told you to put it in ?!
stop using my tampon!
I see London, I see France.
Everyday you change your underpants.
I want my dildo back !
"Good to see you again"
"Don't forget the groceries on your way back"
That's strange... I thought it was blue.
Didn't you wear that yesterday?
How sweet. You remembered.
April Fools!
We need to talk.
No, no, no... The exit is over here!
Wrong door.
Kap: Ha I'm done.
I suggest:
"Nice try with the hood, Sara, but I'd recognize that petite butt anywhere"
I really liked the dynamic of this scene, Kyoko's nonchalance nicely contrasts with Sara's obvious surprise at being skirt-flipped from behind, by her rival no less! That shocked expression... beautiful. Not to mention that sweet rear.
Great submissions all! It's going to be hard to pick a winner.
Quiet One: I couldn't agree more! ^_^ In addition to the contrasting character expressions that you mention, the reason I really like this single frame is due to its well-conceived and clearly defined four-step "flow". After reading the text in the prominent dialogue bubble, the reader's eyes shift to Kyoko (the source of the dialogue), then down to her hand flipping up Sara's skirt (with a brief pause to admire Sara's cute panties and rear), and then back up to Sara's surprised expression.
Scenes like this are what make artist Yamatogawa's works so remarkable.
That's for putting fingerprints on my antique door. Use the handle, or next time, I'll make sure there's company over.
Where's Solid Snake? Under here?
mmm smooth...
You gotta ask yourself one question... do you feel like gettin' lucky? Well, do ya, punk?
"It's really obvious when you fart in a mini-skirt, you know..."
Hmmmmmm, I thought you stopped wearing white a LONG time ago.
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