(Updated July 26, 2009) This was perhaps the most difficult challenge yet. I was most fond of *slurp!*'s entry because it fit in well with the entire scene (Tatsuro's surprised expression, Megumi removing her shoes, no panties). Well done! Thank you all for the submissions, and here are the runners-up:kodi: "Stop! Ok, I believe you. You don't have to put the other shoe in there too!" (Aside from the fact that Megumi is actually holding her other shoe in her left hand, I did laugh out loud at this one. ^_^)
Azimuth: "Thank god you're not a guy!"
Anonymous: "Yahtzee!"
Congratulations to Ero-Otoko for winning previous Challenge #5!
The rules are simple: I have removed the original dialogue from a doujinshi (or eromanga) scene. All you have to do is think of replacement dialogue that brings a wonderfully humorous spin to the scene and submit your text entry by commenting on this post. You may also include some brief "situational information" in brackets. The entry that induces the most laughter will be declared the winner, and I will upload a professional edit of the scene with the winning text and the winner's name.
The scene for this sixth challenge comes from Yukimi's short story Ai no mama ni, Wagamama ni in which Megumi nonchalantly yet dramatically reveals her under-skirt secret to her completely caught-off-guard boyfriend Tatsuro. Good luck!
77 comments:
"OMG i hace X/Ray Vision"
that would be my contribution :P
btw im new in this blog :P
beautiful short story for this challenge... liked the eromanga very much indeed. like you say, the consensual nature makes it much easier to connect plus, the plot can then focus on the quirks of the characters as real people rather than just stereotyped entities
and where can i find more by author yukimi or similar works... that is of the same or relates situation, with characters that are real and relatable.. ?
Argen: Welcome!
reaver: In addition to most works by Shimoyakedou, I would also recommend you check out the following titles by artist Yamatogawa: Aqua Bless, Witchcraft, and Tayu Tayu. All three feature loads of gorgeous artwork, consensual relationships, and original characters with memorable designs...
If you like Evangelion, I would strongly recommend another title by Yukimi called Eee, an erotic re-telling of what I feel is perhaps the single most sorrowful scene in the entire series... Although there is not much characterization in this title since it features already established characters, it is an in-depth look at what Maya might have been experiencing during her "instrumentality". The last page still chokes me up...
"Your shoe is where?!?!?!"
You taught the dog what?!?!
wait
wat
"IMA CHARGIN MA LAZER!!!"
"Dont fart!"
"I should wax more frequently"
or
"Thanks god, for the waxed floors"
"Gahh, you also shaved it just like your sister did!"
"Thank god your not a guy!"
*she tells him she run into a panty thief at the subway*
he:
how should a pantythief at the Subway ... WTF !!!
OK, my turn :
Give me my ipod !!
"I think you should be more conserned where your panties are, than your shoe."
"I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to steal all your panties!"
Another : OMG! It's youtube material !
On another subject, I was told I'm missing the credits on one of the pictures in the version I share of this hentai work. If you read this, Succubus, just send me the proper picture and I'll replace it in the zip I share.
Dialogue:Hea..HEAVEN's DOOR!!!
Caption: Hallelujah~
"3D pig disgusting!"
"Ack!! Danger! Its telling me not to look away!"
Keep looking!
[What a time to lose your contacts]
"Wax on, Wax off"
"Wax on, Wax off"
:awesomeface: Twintails...
"Ugh! She got me"
Excuse me. Can you please share your wallpaper in high resolution? I really love it! Very artistic.
Anon: Read the subtext below the image after you click on it. ^_^ ...or you could just go here.
Hey! Wait! Are those my Keys!?
What!? GIRLS DON'T HAVE WEE WEES!?
OMFG! Are those prada shoes?!!!!
What The HEck!! you Cut OFF your Tail???
Wow, I see that sex change worked out for you
just thought of 2 new one
"Is that where you're hiding my phone!?!?"
and the second one is Dragon Ball inspired...
"Well, I guess I don't need to do a Pat Pat"
And one more, this one was inspired by an Oliver rant...
"You must Schlikaschlika a lot"
*cough* *hack* so you shave after you give me hairballs!
*cough* *hack* so you shave after you give me hairballs!
*GAH! Your clit dissapeared!!!*
OMG! I wish my ass looked like that.
What kind of pencil holder is THAT?!
WOAH!! Where did you get those hair ties?
I vant to suck your blood.
Yahtzee!
What, again?!! Are you really sure you're horny?
No! Don't use the spare panty in your shoe!
Now I've got pink eye!
or
Ooh! a piece of candy!
"Get your shoes on! The ice cream man is coming!"
"I can see forever!"
*pant pant* "Don't worry, ma'am. I'm from the internet."
"No, no, no! Those shoes don't go with that outfit at all."
"You're black and white, too!?"
Caption: Fourth walls are meant to be broken.
"Now hold this tinfoil here!"
Caption: An odd ritual, to be sure, but it always made their TV's picture clearer than ever.
"Penis goes WHERE!?"
Yay, yay, another fun contest. I'm checking this blog as often as my favorite Webcomics these days. Keep up the good work, ES.
It's a trap!
Hallelujah my wish came true
OMG where is your penis!! Is it in your shoe?!
"What? You never told me looking at you pussy made eyes disappear!" or if you prefer *pulls out eyes event horizon style* "I see everything!"
"I see London, I see France, I see... oh... wait, never mind."
"THIS....IS...SPARTA!!!"
OMG! I found Waldo!
"And you call me a pervert!?"
"Is this going to cost me!?"
"Wow! We skipped the appetizer and went straight for dessert!"
"I didn't think you were that desperate!"
"How many other suckers have you caught today with this trick!?"
"Does it bite!?"
"Its way to small! Now I have to find another girlfriend who might fit!"
I knew it ... the pussy is in your shoe !
Girl : Well, it ain't gonna fuck itself...
Guy : !!!
Azimuth you poor deprived man its not "This is Sparta!" its "OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!"
Poor little Timmy was heading up to the roof with his friends when he saw the last thing he would ever expect "MOM?!?!?!?!" He wasn't able to look him mom in the eyes or go to school for weeks after.
Woah! You get satellite TV in there!?
"Over 9000"....lol you might have me on that one...or maybe not
"I was wondering why I smelled fish!"
"Censorship, quickly!"
"Hey, you're that succubus from last time!"
on a side note:
Anyone here knows Hentairules.net?? It's now closed!!! T_T
What the... It's working again??? ... What the heck??
hentairules.net won't work... But www.hentairules.net works?? WTF??
Hey, everyone has the right to fuck up with his server, trying funny things, to the point his host unplugs one's website, right ?
Right ? ^^;;
Anyway, sorry for the 30 minutes downtime, it's working again.
hmmm...I feel like you're trying to tell me something...
Not asking for cuddle, right ?
Is it even normal you beg for it a 7th time !?
This far You didn't told me your name !
babies come from that thing ?
And what about the fact I told you I'm gay ?
"Damn...if I only had a tentacle."
"What kind of strip tease goes from panties to shoes?!?!?!"
What the hell did you do to your hair!? You know I hate pigtails!
Wait a sec! If you're Japanese how come your box doesn't have a black strip!? All the other girls have them!
Stop! Ok, I believe you. You don't have to put the other shoe in there too!
In response to one of Slurp's:
"Dad!?"
fefifofum's is my favorite so far, but to add some subtext:
"Hmm... I feel like you're trying to tell me something."
Caption: Yes, ladies, some of us ARE that dense.
Of course, if that one wins, credit goes to fefifofum.
Now, some more from me-
"I thought you said yours was bigger! Hah."
Caption: Five seconds later, her futanari potion kicked in. She hadn't lied.
"Now this could be a little cold."
Caption: Just another house call from the family doctor. Wait, what were YOU thinking? Pervert.
"D! For the love of Zues, D!"
Caption: A- Ask about the incident last night.
B- Help her find her panties.
C- Make a snide joke.
D- Put it in.
"Wow, it does look a lot cuter shaved! Let's do mine!"
Caption: Her short-haired sister was easily excited, and shame had never really been an issue.
"You're on Punk'd!"
Caption: Shortly thereafter, she killed Ashton Kutcher. There was much rejoicing.
"What the fuck is this?! There is a mirror on the inside!"
"Tell me you bought those yesterday!"
"Bang, zoom, straight to the moon!"
"HOLY CRAP I HAVE THOSE SAME EXACT SOCKS!!!!!!'
Ah! The most sacred of sensual places... the bottom of her feet!
So that's what she meant by enjoying the view!
"I'm telling you, I droped a coin over there!"
I believe the only phrase that can accurately describe this is "FUCK YEAH!!!!"
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