Doujinshi Dialogue Challenge #9

(Updated June 22, 2010) Anonymous wins this challenge with a well-placed reference to the great old American-produced cartoon She-ra. A super-heroine whose alter-ego transformation is triggered by exposing her breasts and receiving a full-body ejaculation sounds like a great ero-manga concept, if you ask me. Just think of all the erotic comedy hijinks that would ensue between her and her likely male sidekick... "C'mon, CUM on me already! Hordak's getting away!" ^_^

Congratulations to TheCampbell for winning previous Challenge #8!

The rules are simple: I have removed the original dialogue from a doujinshi (or eromanga) scene. All you have to do is think of replacement dialogue that brings a wonderfully humorous spin to the scene and submit your text entry by commenting on this post. You may also include some brief "situational information" in brackets. The most creative entry that induces the most laughter will be declared the winner, and I will upload a professional edit of the scene with the winning text and the winner's name.

This scene comes from the short story Honeymoon by Sasagawa Hayashi (笹川ハヤシ) from COMIC Mujin 2009-02. After transfer student Nagafune Miya joins a rooftop sexual encounter already in progress between her fellow student Hideo and their teacher, they compete to see who can please him the most. As Hideo climaxes from the overwhelming pleasure induced by the teacher's act of paizuri, Miya extends her arms wide and revels in the resulting ejaculatory shower. Like most all new transfer students in Japanese fiction, though, Miya is more than she appears... just look at her shadow!

This scene is ripe for potential hilarity... May the best entry win!